Dialog 1
(Discussion Between myself and Miss Campbell about how I am doing in class behavioral wise.)
"Hey, Matthew can you come here for a second," called Miss Campbell
"Sure, Whats it about?" I asked innocently
" I am currently writing your report...." she began in her usual voice
OH O I thought to myself
"And I need to write about your behavior this year," she continued
Oh no this was worse than I thought.
"What do you think I should write?" She asked
"Well.... I am almost always on task... but can be a bit off task at times," I started
"MMM-hmmm. I see, I see," She said quietly to herself.
"Do you think it would be fair if I said that you were very reliable and trustworthy," Miss Campbell asked.
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Dialog 2
(Discussion about the "Year 8 Assembly" between Miss Mills and I)
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Dialog 3
(Between Mr Scholes and I about how I am doing in class)
"Excuse me er um Matthew," Said Mr Scholes from behind me
"Oh, hi Mr Scholes," I replied
"I am trying to see if the students at T.I.S are prepared for when the people from "ERO" ask them how they are doing in class"
"Oh well I am currently a 5B in writing!"
Very good dialogue, but in the 3rd line * " I am currently writing your report...."
ReplyDelete...........................................................^ There is a space there and there shouldn't be, also in the fourth line, oh oh is spelt oh oh not OH O. :) :3